Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Response:
There are different viewpoint on the environmental problems, some argues that there are a several endanger species including animals and plants which are the most relevant environmental issues. While, others think that there are more critical environmental problems. Whereas, in my opinion both views are right, also they are connected and this process is linked to each other like a chain.
Regarding endanger species, the reduction of animals and plant are notably linked to the environment and the lifecycle. For instance, dying specific mouse will have a significant effect on the snake’s population, in that case snakes lose their food resource and die out. However, it is clear that our environment is linked to each other and both plants and animals are living in the huge aquarium named earth, while any problem which happened in any part of these aquarium will have effects on the other parts. Nevertheless, all of the spices will make our environment and nature more charming and valuable, by protecting them we can reduce the speed of destroying and also help to improve environment.
On the other hand, other environmental problems such as air pollution, water pollution and soil pollution will play a significant role in the environmental issues. However, as I mentioned, the environmental pollution can dramatically effect on the life of spices and cause the reduction on them. For example, a dirty air will have effect on the life of birds and decrease their population. Nonetheless, at the first we should protect our nature to protect the whole species. By clearing up the environment from the pollution, number of endanger species will boost.
In conclusion, environmental disorders caused by several issues and are not related to a particular problem, while by modification of our attitudes we can improve the populations and other environmental tips.
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There are different viewpoint on the environmental problems, some argues that there are a several endanger species including animals and plants which are the most relevant environmental issues. While, others think that there are more critical environmental problems. Whereas, in my opinion both views are right, also they are connected and this process is linked to each other like a chain.
Regarding endanger species, the reduction of animals and plant are notably linked to the environment and the lifecycle. For instance, dying specific mouse will have a significant effect on the snake’s population, in that case snakes lose their food resource and die out. However, it is clear that our environment is linked to each other and both plants and animals are living in the huge aquarium named earth, while any problem which happened in any part of these aquarium will have effects on the other parts. Nevertheless, all of the spices will make our environment and nature more charming and valuable, by protecting them we can reduce the speed of destroying and also help to improve environment.
On the other hand, other environmental problems such as air pollution, water pollution and soil pollution will play a significant role in the environmental issues. However, as I mentioned, the environmental pollution can dramatically effect on the life of spices and cause the reduction on them. For example, a dirty air will have effect on the life of birds and decrease their population. Nonetheless, at the first we should protect our nature to protect the whole species. By clearing up the environment from the pollution, number of endanger species will boost.
In conclusion, environmental disorders caused by several issues and are not related to a particular problem, while by modification of our attitudes we can improve the populations and other environmental tips.