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There have been competing views on whether advertisement persuades people successfully or whether it is so common to attract people. In my opinion, advertisements are not as provocative as before in grabbing customers' attention.
There are competing views regarding whether advertising successfully persuades people or has become too commonplace to be effective. In my opinion, advertisements are no longer as compelling as they once were in capturing consumers' attention.
Some people argue that cutting-edge technology has increased brand awareness. For example, ordinary people can advertise their products via Instagram but this possibility was not available a few years ago and they had to pay for an advertisement. Additionally, celebrity endorsements influence people's decisions to purchase even shampoo. For instance, a shampoo called Clear was advertised by Cristiano Ronaldo and an increasing number of people are still using this brand. So, celebrity endorsement has been an effective form of persuasion recently.
Some argue that modern technology has enhanced brand awareness significantly. For instance, individuals can now promote products through platforms like Instagram, an opportunity that was unavailable years ago when paid advertisements were the only option. Additionally, celebrity endorsements continue to influence purchasing decisions. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo’s promotion of Clear shampoo led to a surge in its popularity, demonstrating that such endorsements remain persuasive.
Those on the other side of the argument believe that an increasing number of advertisements have bombarded individuals in recent years. People are bored with repetitive advertising on YouTube and believe that advertisement spoils the flow while they are watching a video. When people are engrossed in a video clip then a pop-up pauses it and they will skip the advertisement with no thought to watch the rest of the program. So, publicizing hasn't found a successful way to attract customers. Furthermore, many companies don’t apply creativity to publicize a product, so people are less inclined to watch an advertisement that just introduces the features of a product.
However, others contend that the sheer volume of advertisements has overwhelmed consumers in recent years. Many find repetitive ads on platforms like YouTube disruptive, often skipping them without hesitation to resume their content. This suggests that advertising fails to engage viewers effectively. Moreover, a lack of creativity in promotional campaigns—such as those merely listing product features—further diminishes consumer interest.
To conclude, considering both views on whether advertising is still convincing or not, I reckon that advertising is not only unattractive but also frustrating, because companies opt for passive ways to convince people to purchase.
In conclusion, while advertising retains some persuasive power, I believe it has largely become ineffective and even irritating, as many companies rely on uninspiring methods to attract customers.