Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Response:
These days it seems that more educated people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raise certain question about the whther they should be free to work in another country or not. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay i will argue that it must be their own decision to choose their desire country to work. The reasons for this are twofold.
Some people believe that because government are spend lots of money to train the professionals, they must be stay in their home country to pay those money back. Meanwhile in my opinion it is the government responsibility to allocate a budget for training their people and they should not expecting people to pay these moeny back with working.
Firstly it is vitally important that expertes such as doctors, engineers and scientists are try hard in their lifetime to become knowledgeable in different scientific areas and they have this righ to choose wherever they wish to work. A particularly fasinating example of this is people who lived in third world countries and they study hard in order to immigrate to an affluent country in the future and experience a better quality of life for themselves and their families.
secondly, I would contend that, migration of professionals in different parts of the world brings a sense of balance. If all of the expertes would live in the same country, what happend to other countries where have not enough professionals?
In conclusion, i once again restate my view that all of the educated people must have this opportunity to work in another country.
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These days it seems that more educated people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raise certain question about the whther they should be free to work in another country or not. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, in this essay i will argue that it must be their own decision to choose their desire country to work. The reasons for this are twofold.
Some people believe that because government are spend lots of money to train the professionals, they must be stay in their home country to pay those money back. Meanwhile in my opinion it is the government responsibility to allocate a budget for training their people and they should not expecting people to pay these moeny back with working.
Firstly it is vitally important that expertes such as doctors, engineers and scientists are try hard in their lifetime to become knowledgeable in different scientific areas and they have this righ to choose wherever they wish to work. A particularly fasinating example of this is people who lived in third world countries and they study hard in order to immigrate to an affluent country in the future and experience a better quality of life for themselves and their families.
secondly, I would contend that, migration of professionals in different parts of the world brings a sense of balance. If all of the expertes would live in the same country, what happend to other countries where have not enough professionals?
In conclusion, i once again restate my view that all of the educated people must have this opportunity to work in another country.